An exemplar of an Excellence essay for Science Fiction:

Ms Munro wrote it in class Wednesday 19th September, and it was marked by Mr Papprill.

MU's comments: "I was not 100% satisfied with it - I went off on a few tangents and didn't end up discussing dystopia as much I had intended when I began writing. I also felt that my conclusion was rushed when the hour was over - but time management is part of the assessment!"